MARY'S BLOG COMMENT TO KUSHA

Hi Viewers,
It is really nice to see you checking out my blog.
Today I have commented on Kusha's blog and I would like to share my comment with you.
I hope you enjoy it!!!

Remember when....

Hi blog viewers,

Today, this blog post is all about the last 6 years that I have spent at Hay Park School. Hay Park School has been an inspiration to me because I've learnt so many new things, made great friends, and have had wonderful teachers. All my brothers came here too. 

Keep reading to find out more about my journey at Hay Park School.

Students Toolkit day.

Hi my name is Mary as you know because this is my blog that you are on.
Student tool kit day was held on the 10th of November 2015.
WHAT IS TOOL KIT DAY?
Tool kit day is when schools or may be classes come to share their learning so we learn new facts and today Hay Park School taught New Windsor School some new facts.
Student tool kit day was so exciting because we learn't new facts about scratch, movie, sock puppets and QR codes and what QR stands for and many other  things.

Should Zoe trust the eels gang?

Hi my name is Mary.
This informations from the book flood land.
It is a really interesting book.
I hope one day you would be interested in reading this book.

SHOULD ZOE TRUST THE GANG?

I think Zoe should not trust the eels gang because the gang might be using Zoe for the boat to escape the island and do something bad to her like to eat her and travel so they could be fool of eating. There are thousands of reasons of why Zoe should not trust the eels gang like because they might travel somewhere else instead of travelling where Zoe wants to travel to.

Mary's PE TIPS

Hi my name is Mary and this DLO is created by me and Sinead.
This DLO is about tips to for sprinting fast.
I hope you enjoy it!

Mary's Digital Footprint

Hi my name is Mary as you all know.
This blog post is all about being safe on-line.
I hope you enjoy it.

Mary and Jeanett Sunsmart

Hi my name is Mary and I have completed this work with my friend Jeanett.
This is my first bog post in term 4 YAY!.
This blog post is about sun-smart and what you need to wear when you are in the sun.
I hope you enjoy it and of course learn from it.

CYBER SMART COMIC

Hi my name is Mary as you all know.
This Google drawing comic is all about cyber safety.
I hope you are enjoy it!!!

RUGBY WORLD CUP TEAM

Hi again sports fans this presentation that I am going to talk to you all about  the team Wales.
I hope you are a big fan of the Wales.
Here is the presentation.....

How to play sport around the world.

Hi sports fans are you up and ready to go and play some sports that you have never played before?
Well I am!......
This is the link so you can watch the video...
I hope you enjoy it...
https://www.movenote.com/v/6BmijPNCqu-24

How to play Ki O Rahi

How to play Ki O Rahi?
This video is created by me ( Mary ) ,  Alaskah, Saunoa and Rita.
This video is shows us how to play Ki O Rahi.
Here is link to watch out amazing video.

Mary and Toto's Sock Puppet

This Video is created by me and my friend Toto...
This video is a conversation in Te Reo Maori...
The video is up loaded in to YouTube other wise here is the video and link.
Mary and Toto's Sock Puppet Video

The Viewer..... Should Tristan

Hi everyone this is a padlet of what Tristan should do... This is not just my ideas it is my class mates ideas as well...
  

Created with Padlet

The Viewer ( By Shaun Tan )

This is a photo Mary.
Thanks to my buddy Rita she is the one that took the photo and helped me edit the photo/video.
We got this idea from the book called The Viewer.
The book called The Viewer is written by Shaun Tan.
Listen to this video to experience what it will be like.

Click on this link to listen to the video...

Mary's blog comment to Mayleen

This is my blog comment to Mayleen from May Road School.
This is a quality blog comment because I am teaching Mayleen new facts.

Mary's All about camp

This is my ALL ABOUT CAMP presentation.
This camp presentation is about what we did at camp.

Mary's blog post comment to Simeon

This is my blog post to Simeon about his experience at camp.
I think this is a quality comment because I asked a question and I have proof of what Simeon has posted about.

Mary's Remember when poem

This is my remember when poem .
This is all the things that I have done at camp.
Just by reading this I hope you can image what it will be like at camp.

That Was Camp.

Remember when I was afraid to climb the Giant ladder? I was Afraid to climb the Giant ladder because It wasn't that stabled and when you were climbing it started of a little wide then once you nearly reach the top it gets really wide.

Remember when I almost drowned because my group was enjoying surf kayaking and the Kayak landed on top of my head?

That was my two scariest moments but at the end of the day I felt like I was enjoying it and I wanted to do more of that activity.

THAT WAS CAMP

Remember how I was a bad girl and when all the girls went to sleep but then I didn't want to go to sleep so I was peeking out of my blanket and then the teacher was in front of me looking at me and but then she just caught me fake sleeping?

Remember how my group activity was Archery and everyone else hit the board but I was the one always hitting the grass?

That was my embarrassing moment .

THAT WAS CAMP!!!

Remember when my activity was surf kayaking and at the end It was free time so I was swimming in the big waves and it was really scary because it was really dirty that you can't even see the ground and the only thing you can feel is seaweed  ?

That was my scariest moment in my entire life.

Mary's Blog Post to kererucreators

This is my comment to kererucreators school and I commented on the camp page.
This is my comment.....

Now I have an  idea of what are we going to go at my school camp.
Thanks to kererucreators school.

5/06/2015 MF speed write proof read: Sparkling star shinning upon us

Begin Writing Here:

[Title]

Sparkling star shining upon us!

[Introduction]

Do you ever wondered what are those sparkling, shining planets in the sky?

well, there are called stars, stars can shine every night!

Want to know more about stars well read along.

[Paragraph 1]

A life cycle of a star

Firstly a star is born in the dark hearts of the dark clouds in space.

Stars are born in a great clouds of hydrogen gas and dust called nebulae.

The chemicals in the stars are called carbon and oxygen.

( ONLY IN THE NIGHT TIME!!! )

Paragraph 2]

Types of stars

Stars are recognised easily because they are really bright and they are colorful.

There is a star called Red star super giant also a very hot mass called  white dwarf.

Did you know that stars make constellation in the sky? Then after a star explodes, its denses and shrunken core remains.

There are different types of stars like a proto and dwarf star.

[Paragraph 3]

Appearance

Stars are different colours and they are also different sizes, every star you see every night it is bigger and brighter than our sun. Many stars and the sun have spots on their surface which are the cooler areas.

[Conclusion]

There you go you have your own report on stars. I hope I gave you some information about stars and gave you a clue to write your own report but it might be for anything for example the nature and how they grow.

To find out more information about stars go to

http://science.nationalgeographic.com/science/space/universe/stars-article/

My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)	yes
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way	Yes
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification	yes
outlines the main features of the subject
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)	yes
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject	yes
give detailed information (factual descriptions)	yes
include specific, technical vocabulary	yes
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found